An English speaking friend wants to spend a two-weeks holiday in your region and has written asking for information and advice Write a letter to your friend. In your letter offer to find somewhere to stay give advice about what to do give information about what clothes to bring

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Hi Dave Nice to hear from you that you are

finally

going to visit my country. I hope you planned your trip flexibly because I have some parts of advice on how to watch more.

First

of all, if you depart to the capital you should avoid the city

center's

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hostels to stay in.

Instead

of it, I recommend you book a room at any hotel on the left river side of the city. If you can't find free rooms there, just write

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and I will ask my close friend to shear his coach.

Secondly

, the best place for dinner which you have to visit is a local restaurant with native food - "Puzata hata". You can try anything from the menu there. Don't limit yourself to only city activities and go to the countryside and visit famous historical places. You will adore it, I promise. The only thing you should know is the weather in

this

part of fall. Bring

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high-tracking boots and a

sport

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jacket, there

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will be enough. Don't be shy to write

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to me

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anytime with a question. Enjoy

you

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trip. Yours sincerely, Alex

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