some people think that cars should be band in the big city center do you agree or disagree??

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I totally agree with
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statement .nowadays , every person thinks that a
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is an essential thing in their life.
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, they believe that without a
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their status says that there is no value among their friends , relatives and colleague.while some
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think totally reversed they think that a
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is not important in their daily lives .,
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they think it should be avoided use in the
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centre
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.There are some reasons behind that will discuss in the following paragraph. In the cut-throut ,competetion every folk are and they do not have time to wait at
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signal because ,in the
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,
centre
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most the
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have a
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they rarely adoption public transport like, the Metro,Rails and bues
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most of the colleges and Universities and Big and small companies situties in the
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centre
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so,most of them prefer to travel in their auto
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,at the Business time road are Blocked and there is huge traffic.
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,some folk think if they benefit public transport
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of their own cars and all.
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the traffic problem will be solved or less
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reduce air pollution and
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get fresh air and there are many other reasons
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like
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accident
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accidents.We all know that cars and other vehicles accident is more compared in the countryside areas, It's very high and often happens in the
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centre
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area.Due to all the
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reasons some
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motor vehicle should be restricted in the
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centre
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by the government and we must utilise public transport and generate government revenue and helps them. ,
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it's good for the government as well as human life. To conclude, the use of motor vehicles in the
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centre
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is very harmful to both
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as well as human life.

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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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