Nowadays young people are admiring media and sports stars, even though they do not set a good example. Do you think this is a positive or negative development?

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modern world, it is irrefutable fact that children are widely influenced by scrolling social media and following their star athletes. Well, it is a good thing that children can get different kinds of knowledge from celebrities but problem is that children do not learn any good things from the start. So I strongly believe that it is a negative trend in the world.
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with, infants are addicted to spending a lot of time on social media applications
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as Instagram, Facebook and Snapchat at those platforms they find their dream actor or sports player and start to follow their routine life with they
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want to implement those habits in their life.
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, while following starts offsprings forget in which society they are living. Adults' behaviour change in front of their parents.
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, Once students started to admire their stars or favourite athlete player they forget to set their future goals and
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go on a side track.
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, one research conducted by The Times of India found that 70% of school students lost their concentration while studying because of a lot of usage of social media. After a few ,days offspring are not obeyed their parents' and teachers' talk and
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they will be stuck in big trouble. In conclusion, Infants follow their dream buddy without getting in-depth knowledge of that celebrity. They do not know their journey to becoming a star and forget to set a goal for what he/she wants to become in future. So again I reaffirm my opinion that it is a totally negative trend.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • media personalities
  • sports icons
  • role models
  • admiration
  • influence
  • behavior
  • mindset
  • values
  • unethical behavior
  • healthy lifestyles
  • social media platforms
  • celebrity culture
  • career aspirations
  • educational goals
  • positive change
  • ethical standards
  • amplify
  • idolize
  • public perception
  • impressionable
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