It is important for children to learn the difference between right and wrong at an early age. Punishment is necessary to help them learn this distinction. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement? What sort of punishment should parents and teachers be allowed to use to teach good behavior to children?

Childhood is one of the most important growth stages in life. Learning the difference between wrong and

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. I personally agree with

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viewpoint. On the one hand, there are some reasons why some people think that punishment is not a good way. First and foremost

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children

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’s behaviour can be changed over the years. By

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are growing up, their friends or society has significant effects on their personality or behaviour.

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, a child who is a pupil even if was trained about wrong and

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might ignore them because of his surrounding

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filled by some students who did not learn

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distinction.

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, the early age is the best learning period in

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’s lives.

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and personalities of

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are being shaped, and

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are impressed by their parents or teachers. It is reasonable that parents and teachers should be allowed physical and nonphysical punishment, but it is important to consider

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tool at the correct time and way because misused punishment might foster

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to continue wrong activities.

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tempted by his friends and commits theft, his parent can punish him by cutting his friendship with that friend at that time.

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, in my opinion, there are some reasons why learning the difference between wrong and

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at an early age is important. The reason

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as brain and personality shaping in childhood is one of the prominent causes. Using various punishments in

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way can be allowed by parents and trainers, but it should

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at the

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time.