There will be a traditional celebration in your country and you want to invite your friend from an English speaking country . Write him/her a letter and invite your friend. Explain what happens at the party describe the tradition and why itʼs important in your country say why itʼs important for your friend to be there .

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Dear Ann, I hope you're doing well. I'm writing

this

letter to invite you to the Diwali celebrations that I'm hosting,

this

Saturday. I know I've invited you at

such

short notice, but I recall you telling me that you were free on

this

day. Diwali is a traditional event in my culture, which we celebrate every year. The reason

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why we celebrate

this

event is because of a myth. A god named Rama killed a Ravana, a

viscious

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vicious

demon. We spend the day eating delicious food and lighting oil lamps. I know how much you love my mom's cooking, so I think you will be excited to come! I invited you as you are my best friend. You have been there beside me during my tough times

this

year, and I want you to celebrate with me on

this

joyfull

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joyful

occassion

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occasion

. I shouldn't be saying

this

, but I have a

suprise

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surprise

waiting for you as

our

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part of our tradition. I guess you have to attend the event to see it yourself!

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wait to see you on Saturday. Happy Diwali! Lots of Love,

Ramyen

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Ramen

Submitted by ramyensangheran12 on Wed Jan 18 2023

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7 paragraphs

187 words

6.50

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Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

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Lexical resource: 4.0

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Clear and correct grammar

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