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Some people believe that a job provides both income and for a social life, while others think that friends should be made outside of work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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Fewer
people
 do think that
work
 gives them money as well as friends, and a few believe that peers can be made outside of
work
Firstly
, I would want to say that
work
 is a place where a lot of
people
 come get-together. Friendship is something
that is
 very difficult to build for some and very easy for some who are social butterflies. Some might like the
work
 that they do, and some don't .
For example
, a woman goes to do her
job
 just to provide for her family and to pay her bills, and she might not really like the
job
 she does, but she has to in order to meet her requirements. She may or may not be comfortable with other
people
 around her. A workplace is a man's worship, it could either make him or destroy him. If one loves the
job
 that he/she is working, they automatically get along with other
people
 talking about their
work
 progress and interests
hence
 resulting in making new pals and building new relationships . Whereas some are not very open and are in their own bubble, they could be struggling to start and be the
first
 ones to talk, or they
also
 could dislike their
job
, which plays a vital role in building new relationships with others as anxiety could
also
 be a cause for it.
For example
, an anxious teenager works to pay his own bills to be able to pay his exam fees, so his main focus is to give his one hundred per cent at
work
 and can no way be distracted by anybody else . What I think about it is that peers make
life
 simpler, let it be joy or sorrows, somebody's presence can make a major difference in
life
, and to be able to talk and share with someone every day makes
work
 easier and
hassle free
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. It helps one keep their mental health healthy and
also
 we get to learn new, exciting lessons and things from each other that can either be helpful in
life
 or just within the 4 walls of
work
life
 .
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