Some people believe that a job provides both income and for a social life, while others think that friends should be made outside of work. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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do think that
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gives them money as well as friends, and a few believe that peers can be made outside of
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, I would want to say that
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is a place where a lot of
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come get-together. Friendship is something
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very difficult to build for some and very easy for some who are social butterflies. Some might like the
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that they do, and some don't .
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, a woman goes to do her
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just to provide for her family and to pay her bills, and she might not really like the
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she does, but she has to in order to meet her requirements. She may or may not be comfortable with other
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around her. A workplace is a man's worship, it could either make him or destroy him. If one loves the
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that he/she is working, they automatically get along with other
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talking about their
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progress and interests
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resulting in making new pals and building new relationships . Whereas some are not very open and are in their own bubble, they could be struggling to start and be the
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ones to talk, or they
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could dislike their
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, which plays a vital role in building new relationships with others as anxiety could
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be a cause for it.
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, an anxious teenager works to pay his own bills to be able to pay his exam fees, so his main focus is to give his one hundred per cent at
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and can no way be distracted by anybody else . What I think about it is that peers make
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simpler, let it be joy or sorrows, somebody's presence can make a major difference in
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, and to be able to talk and share with someone every day makes
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easier and
hassle free
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. It helps one keep their mental health healthy and
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we get to learn new, exciting lessons and things from each other that can either be helpful in
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or just within the 4 walls of
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life
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