In the future, all cars, buses and trucks will be driverless. The only people travelling inside these vehicles will be passengers. Do you think te advantages of driverless vechicles outweigh the disadvantages.?

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The advent of technology in the
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decade has been amazingly spectacular and
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, we can visualise reality in future. Driverless vehicles, which at one time were a science fiction concept are today particularly emerging as a new epitome of technological advancement . Vehicles without drivers but with passengers only have caught the fancy of the population and in the essay, we shall discuss the advantages and disadvantages and particularly reflect on how the pros overshadow the cons.
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, the concept of driverless transport powered by electricity
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of fossil fuels, which obviously is
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friendly.
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, they would lead to zero carbon footprint and can be recharged by renewable sources.
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, the use of computer chip and camera are instrumental in significantly improving vehicle safety standard as automated driving is unaffected by stress, tiredness or any distraction that a human is exposed
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,
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-mile delivery comprising food and goods by drones has been started by Amazon in Dubai which could be the starting point for commuting passengers without drivers in public and private transport safely and will
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be in vogue due to its environment-friendly features.
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, electric vehicles, without a pilot, possibly could lead to a loss of employment of people in the logistics sector. The transportation sector provides employment to millions and consequentially is the biggest contributor to the service industry. According to a survey it was observed that most of the drivers are not skilled in any other trade and will be unable to find an alternate employment opportunity.
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, its universal suitability in varied geographies and climatic conditions is yet to be proven and the solution to additional complexities of the cargo transport eco-system needs to be factored in and solved for especially in difficult terrains like mountains and plateaus. Conclusively, we can say that driverless cars obviously will be the technical enhancement of tomorrow and the benefits outweighs the risks involved. As is in any new invention, it must be carefully handled to ensure the commuters reap the benefit of the invention and overcome the initial challenges.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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