Some people prefer activities and lifestyles in hot climates while others prefer ‎activities and lifestyles in cold climates. Discuss both views, and give your ‎opinion.‎

Few individuals adore summers because they have personal reasons and

argument

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. While some pupils

likes

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winter

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the winter

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atmosphere due to lifestyle and activities. In my, opinion both seasons have advantages and disadvantages. The position

os

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of

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seasons appears to be more rational. In

this

, essay we will

further

elaborate on the positive and negative effects of

this

trend and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. There are multifarious reasons which will

further

explain why people's like and dislike various climates. The

first

and foremost reason is hot temperature is

challenging

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environment because

in

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India

,

temperature

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the temperature

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is increasing by leaps and bounds ,

people

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and people

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feels

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exhausted.

On the other hand

,

winter

has

low

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a low

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temperature

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temperatures

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, the population is feeling comfortable in cold climates. Another pivotal aspect is the sun

provide

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great

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amount of vitamin D and most

of

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the

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international visitors travel

in

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to

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India

because of Summer. While, in

India

, the population travels

in

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hill

station

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stations

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due to they are suffering from

sun burn

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. Moving

further

, it is pertinent to mention that some activities

such

as swimming, and, cycling prefer in

hot

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a hot

the hot

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climate

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climates

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. Whereas, ice skating, and, climbing the mountains is well-known activities in

winters

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winter

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.

Moreover

, a survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford in London revealed that American pupils

loves

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Indian

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the Indian

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lifestyle, but the population of

India

loves

America

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weathers

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.

However

, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

this

trend.

Although

,

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the most alarming one is

winter

is belong to affluent societies due to that times, heavy clothes and blankets

required

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are required

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. While in

summers

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summer

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these kinds of things

is

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not crucial.

Besides

, water plays a vital role in summer due to individuals

drinks

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more water in

summers

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summer

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.

Additionally

,

woods

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wood

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is

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the backbone of

winters

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winter

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, people Buried trees and

getting

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heat from them. To sum up, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion that the perks of

winter

and summer are instrumental indeed. The potential drawbacks of

this

trend should not be overlooked either.