Private car ownership has been increasing over the past few decades. This has given ordinary people greater mobility, but has also led to concerns about traffic congestion and air pollution. Do the advantages of private car ownership outweigh the disadvantages?

In recent years, the use of
vehicles
has become the easiest means of transportation and most individuals want to own one for their comfort and convenience.
Therefore
, there had been an increased rate of ownership of cars which can sometimes lead to
traffic
jams and severe air pollution.
However
, I think the merits of owning a
car
surpass the demerits.
Firstly
, the development of
vehicles
have made movement easier and faster and aside from these, there are
also
other advantages like comfort, freedom to do anything whilst driving, it's safer, cheaper transportation fee ,especially for the entire family etc. When people have free access or own a
car
, they feel relaxed and unbothered when invited to an occasion and their only problem will be fueling it.
For instance
, my uncle once had some difficulties transporting his family for events and decided to get a sienna which is big enough for the entire family of 6
which
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would have been very costly
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them down to a gathering without their personal
vehicles
and most importantly it helps them in case of emergencies,
that is
if one kid is sick, they easily rushed him to the hospital rather than looking for a taxi to pick them up.
On the other hand
, owning
vehicles
can be very exhausting in terms of maintenance, and repairs, stressful driving , expensive to buy and quite difficult to learn and obtain a license.
For example
, the amount of maintaining a
car
is more than the amount of purchasing one. The negative effects of increased ownership of cars include road
traffic
accidents due to reckless driving or bad roads, air and noise pollution and
traffic
jams.
However
, these are issues that can be resolved by good functional
traffic
schemes with strict rules and regulations. In conclusion, personal
car
owners are at more advantages than disadvantages and the governments can supervise and assist the road regulatory authority by providing good roads which lead to the easy flow of jams and noise and air pollution will
therefore
be reduced.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • mobility
  • independence
  • economic benefits
  • automotive industry
  • convenience
  • commuting
  • leisure activities
  • social benefits
  • emissions
  • air pollution
  • global warming
  • traffic congestion
  • urban areas
  • public infrastructure
  • maintenance
  • road safety
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