Some people say that the best way to improve public health is by increasing the number of sports facilities.Others, however, say that this would have little affect on public health and other measure are required. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.
In recent times people tend to
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created a debate on whether building more Linking Words
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facilities
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facilities
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exercise
will lead to an improvement in public Use synonyms
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opinion is based on the fact that much research has shown that exercising reduces the danger of obesity and heart-related issues. Linking Words
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, kids who have easy access to Linking Words
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facilities
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problems that are the result of a sedentary lifestyle.
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health
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sports
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view consider that the Linking Words
issue
has its roots in the lack of fitness education young kids get from school that does not help them create healthy habits as adults. Use synonyms
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, students do not learn in school which foods are nutritious and healthy for them or how often they should Linking Words
exercise
. That leads to becoming 'couch potatoes' adults that do not follow a healthy lifestyle and do not Use synonyms
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. To sum up, from that point of view improving the masses' Use synonyms
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must be considered a more complex problem and the solution cannot be as simple as creating more infrastructures.
After taking everything mentioned into consideration, my personal scope on the Use synonyms
issue
is that increasing the places individuals can work out will not solve the problem or have any significant impact on public Use synonyms
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inherited from young age and schools and physical education must work to change it.Linking Words
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