Many people feel the urban encivronments are more unhealthy than they have ever been What do you think are the main causes of the problem? What measures can be effective in tackling this problem ?
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, many industires
produce gases and water which are Correct your spelling
industries
harmfull
to all living things on the earth. Correct your spelling
harmful
Secondly
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the demand
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