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A friend who lives in another country has invited you to come and stray with him/her on your next holiday. You are to busy to accept the invitation. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter, -Thank him/her for the invitation - Explain why you cannot come - - Ask him/her about other time to visit

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Dear Sam How are you and How is your family been doing? I just received your letter and I am so thankful for your heartful invitation
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 your wedding.
Moreover
, I am really happy for you and your soon-to-be wife Susan.
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 I really want to join in
this
 auspicious event , as you know I recently changed my work job and could not ask for a week off.
Furthermore
, my company is at its peak phase and I can not leave all the work behind. But, I am planning to visit my family the
next
 summer and trying to save the paid days of vacation. So, I can spend more time there and meet you all.
In addition
, we can plan a small party to celebrate your wedding, where all our school friends can join us.
Lastly
, I am apologizing again for not attending your happiest moment. I hope you both all the success and blessings. Thank you Take care and See you! Yours Faithful Sandeep Kaur
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Use a variety of complex and simple sentences

You should use complex sentences in your writing, but it does not mean that you should try to make all of our sentences complex.

‘Complex’ sentences are not actually very complex; they are just two or more simple sentences put together. Putting them together makes the essay more coherent and cohesive.

Examples:

I really want to study but I’m too tired.

I wore a warm coat because the weather was cold.

If action is not taken soon on climate change, global warming will get worse.

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