Ambition is being emphasized in today’s society. How important do you think it is for people who want to succeed in life? Is it a positive or negative characteristic?

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The phenomenon of the desire of humans
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continued growth these days has aroused wide concern among various circles. Divergent as
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issue in question may be, I believe that holding a
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and attempt for it would have more benefits for
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who want to succeed. Regarding the disadvantages of holding ambition for
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who hope to achieve something, probably the
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reason pop-up in my mind is that
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characteristic may make others feel disgusting. To illustrate,
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who want to make their
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come true, usually are hard workers. They spend a lot of time on work even though the others are resting.
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always have a good image of their superiors, but others are not.
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life attitude would potentially make some enemies without your conscious. Despite the aforementioned negative side reason, I still believe that ambition would bring us more advantages in our life. A desire is a great motivation for the evolution of human society.
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to try to fly like a bird, and
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the aeroplane has been invented. Sometimes
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may get the result that you want, but the path you through may bring other things to you like your personal experience, and friends that have the same
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the dream
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is
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element for someone who wants to have some accomplishments. Under
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line of thinking, It seems to me that ambition may make some
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annoyed with us, but it can give us other benefits that are valuable and beautiful.
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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