Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we are no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

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At the present time, by increasing number of
ads
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people
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are influenced to
purchase
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something which they watched
on
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the advertisement even though
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this
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products
are not need
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for them, while some
people
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believe that our consideration for
ads
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will not be same in the upcoming years. In my opinion,
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the advertisement
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advertisement
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advertisements
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will serve many years for us to
purchase
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goods without any longer
think
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thinking
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. For most, advertisements
seems
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like no stay here and
people
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do not think much longer about that.
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, an increasing number of
adverts
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on
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the
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everywhere are annoying many individuals by repeating and repeating the same
ads
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,
therefore
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even today
people
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are not paying attention and losing their own interest for
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kind of
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. A good example can be my grandfather because when his eyes glimpse
to
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adverts
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on the television, he practically always
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switch
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it to another channel because watching
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only one type of
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ads
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makes him irritated.
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, I believe that the
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of advertisements will continue to keep the
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of interest of
people
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. As
adverts
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has
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have
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some involving features with some  emotions which can oblige humans to pick
goods
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the goods
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up
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apply
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which they saw
on
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the advertisement.
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, if my little brother
watch
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watches
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somethings
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something
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on
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the
adverts
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like toys or stuffed animal, he
ask
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about
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purchase
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purchasing
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it
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them
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,
although
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he has lots of toys as same
like
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as
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he watched.
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,
this
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process of advertising never
loss
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and may continue to increase its emotions which can persuade
people
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to
purchase
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products. In conclusion, an increasing number of
ads
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may make angry the individuals, but I feel that advertisements keep
continue
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to persuade
the
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people
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to buy the goods which they saw
on
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the
ads
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.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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