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Writing Samples
Band 7.5

You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Respected Sir, I am writing to apply for the job opportunity of language
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 at your prestigious institution. I am referring to the advertisement published in the local newspaper on the 22nd of January, 2022. The position is open for all candidates who have a Bachelor of Education degree and a post-graduation degree with at least 2 years of experience. I am interested in teaching Hindi and Indian cookery. I have seen that your guide for
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 term does not include these courses, but I understand there are now large numbers of second and third-generation Indians living in
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 part of the city who may be keen to learn more about their culture. I am passing all the eligibility criteria. I was a Hindi teacher in India but moved to Dubai in 2019. There, I taught for Beginners at two community colleges. The course assumed students had no prior knowledge of the subject. It gave them simple everyday language,
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 recognition of the alphabet. The cookery course focused on easy meal preparation and the art of pickling. In Abu Dhabi, I could teach the same courses as previously, or we could devise new ones, depending on what the college
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 its market to be. I look forward to hearing from you. Yours faithfully, Rubina Gill

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task achievement
Ensure all required information from the advertisement is included in detail.
coherence cohesion
The greeting and closing of the letter are appropriate and polite, maintaining a professional tone.
task achievement
The letter clearly describes the applicant's interest in the courses they want to teach, demonstrating relevance to the community's needs.
coherence cohesion
The letter is logically structured, with clear paragraphs delineating different points.

Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

  • A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
  • The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
  • A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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