Some people think that e-books are the death of paper books while others think that paper books will never disappear. Discuss both sides and give your opinion

Nowadays we have a
choise
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choice
between e-
books
and
paper
books
. Some people think that the development of
electronical
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electronic
opportunities may kill old-fashioned real
books
. As
usual
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there are some advantages and disadvantages on each side. On the one
hand
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e-
books
are super convenient as you can always get any
book
you want from the internet, almost immediately. You don't need to go anywhere to buy it
phisically
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physically
or to wait for delivery.
E-
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book
can always be with you in a bag
for example
.
Such
kind of hobby doesn't need a lot of space at home as
book
shells or libraries are unnecessary.
On the other
hand
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nothing can be compared with
paper
book
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books
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, with
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their
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smell, touch and structure. It is always nice to have a library at home (if there is enough space), to be able to take the
book
into hands, to feel it, to see the cover.
Moreover
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there are some examples of pretty expensive items if they are old or published
within
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limited
edition
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editions
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. So if you
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inherited
such
book
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a book
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you can be called a lucky person.
Besides
, a
book
remains to be a good present. In my
opinion
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e-
books
cannot lead to the death of
paper
books
as thoughts and priorities always differ. They
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definitely
took
some place
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in our world and decreased
paper
books
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book
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sales, but still
person's
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a person's
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wish to read is the most important, no matter in which format. I prefer to have an opportunity to turn the pages and spend less time in front of the screen.
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The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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