Some people say that advertising is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we are no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both these views and give your own opinion.

•In our modern life, technology has been developing almost every day and many big

companies

prefer introducing their new

products

through

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social media networks.

Therefore

the majority of individuals emphasize that advertising is one of the

most

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best

way

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to persuade us to purchase

products

. Other

humans

point out that advertising is extremely widespread currently,

therefore

many

humans

are not paying much concentration

for

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it. From my point of view, it is

more

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a more

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beneficial

way

to purchase high-quality

of

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goods. •On the one hand, advertising has

becoming

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well-known day-by-day because it is the best successful

way

for the customers and many big

companies

try to

advertising

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their new

products

in order to introduce their

products

for

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inhabitants through the internet and it gives a big opportunity for large

companies

to increase

number

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the number

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of customers.

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, in my country, every 15 minutes,

ads

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ad

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are broadcast, which

a

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great

way

to save time, even if it is expensive and now the number of internet users

are

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increasing.

Therefore

advertisements

are becoming popular. •

On the other hand

, other individuals strongly believe that

,

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nowadays all

companies

try to

advertising

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advertise

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their

products

through the internet and television to sell all their

products

without challenges.

As a

result

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,result

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this

leads to

increase

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an increase

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of

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poor-quality

advertisements

.

Besides

that, many individuals are not paying more attention

for

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them and as the number of

advertisements

increase, the quality of adverse

products

decrease

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and

this

causes people to lose trust in

advertisements

. •In conclusion, the majority of

humans

say that

advertisements

are the biggest factor in the development of big

companies

and it gives

opportunity

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for them to achieve success. Other

humans

emphasize that

advertisements

are becoming less reliable

day-by-day

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and people are not paying much attention to them.