Some people say that adversiting is extremely successful at persuading us to buy things. Other people think that advertising is so common that we no longer pay attention to it. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

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appears on any information platform
such
as television and social media. While some
people
argue that many
advertisings
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successfully influence
people
to buy some products, others think that they pay less attention
on
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adverts because of
its
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their
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long duration.
This
essay will elaborate
both
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of these views and I will give my personal opinion.
To begin
with,
people
tend to purchase things after watching some promotions which have been made with attractive approaches. Several big brands create unique adverts and
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with a famous public
figure
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figures
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.
For instance
, Vespa produces a special motor unit which involves Justin Bieber as the brand ambassador. As a consequence, Justin Bieber influences his fans to own and purchase that product. Indeed,
this
advertisement
spends a huge expenditure on its production.
However
, Vespa undergoes significant sales after launching that special
adds
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ads
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. On contrary, other
people
currently have less interest to watch any
advertisement
due to its long duration.
Sometime
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, one
advertisement
takes 5
until
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10 minutes to display
their
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its
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content. In my point of view, it is necessary to have an efficient time and keep its interesting values.
For example
, when
people
watch a video on Youtube, they commonly get distraction by the
adds
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ads
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that suddenly appear on their screen. Because of its long duration,
people
will ignore or directly skip the
advertisement
to continue the video they watch.
Therefore
, some
adds
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ads
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fails
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to deliver their information and sales to the audience. In summary, while some
people
consider advertisements can persuade them to buy a product, others prefer to ignore them. An
advertisement
should not only be impactful to attract
people
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people's
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attention but
also
should be short.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • persuade
  • promote
  • attract
  • influence
  • impact
  • consumerism
  • commercialism
  • market
  • product
  • brand
  • endorsement
  • manipulative
  • saturated
  • overwhelmed
  • repetitive
  • distracting
  • irrelevant
  • exaggerated
  • misleading
  • desensitized
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