You recently sent some documents by post, but they did not arrive at the destination. Write a letter to the post office manager. In your letter, •give details of the situation •describe the documents •say what action you want the post office to take
Dear Sir or Madam,
My name is Isa Azim and I am writing
this
letter to ask you to track the package that I posted last
week.
Actually, last
Monday, 25th October, I delivered some documents to my friend. However
, I was informed by my friend that the documents were not received. In addition
, due to
the post schedule, it should have been delivered to him within 3 days and it has passed more than 8 days.
The documents were wrapped in yellow paper and through the post office's suggestion, I put all of them in a white package. Moreover
, my full name was written as the sender and the receiver's name was John Wick. The post receipt is pined.
It would be appreciated if you inform me about my document's situation whether it was posted or not and if not, what was the issue.
Please accept my delightful thanks in advance. My contact number and email address are attached to the letter. I am looking forward to hearing from you as soon as possible.
Yours sincerely
Isa AzimSubmitted by eesa.azim on
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coherence cohesion
Ensure each paragraph focuses on a clear single idea, and use a variety of cohesive devices to connect your ideas effectively.
task achievement
Remember to fully extend and support ideas while staying relevant to the task. Answer all parts of the prompt clearly.
Use cohesive linking words accurately and appropriately
Linking words are very important in your essay.
To score effectively on your IELTS exam, you should make an effort to implement short concise sentences coupled with linking words.
Almost every sentence in your essay should have a linking word of some sort.
In fact, the only sentences that can omit linking words are your background sentence and thesis.
Linking word examples:
- firstly
- secondly
- thirdly
- in additional
- moreover
- also
- for example
- for instance
- therefore
- however
- although
- even though
- despite