Nowadays many people prefer to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

These days many

peoples

mostly adolescents tend to buy

high end

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luxury

items

including

outer wears

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, shoes and purses.

Then

why do people

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more and more attention to overpriced possessions when there

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many other affordable options available? From what I see, I would consider it as

a

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neither positive nor negative development.

Firstly

,

high end

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brands

such

as Gucci, Hermes and many others put value

first

in their goods. By

this

I mean, possessing a

long lasting

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good quality product

it

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could save you from unnecessary shopping travels in the

further

years, and making waste every few years that will do great damage to mother earth. Another great example of buying

luxury

items

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could never go out of fashion

trends

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. Nowadays, fast fashion trends are taking

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stroll

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in society that would only

last

for a few months to

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years.

This

will lead to, mass clothing waste unlike high ends brands goods. As a counter-argument,

modern

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days many naive and young

peoples

are being more eager to buy those fancy

items

, to purchase what they want they would get loans

out of

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banks or pressure their parents to purchase for them. As

a

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explanation,

this

generation we call

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generation where many adolescents make friends based on their wealth and popularity not on their personality or having things in common.

As a result

, many

peoples

mostly teenagers believe owning and being clothed in priced

items

will help them to become more valued in

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society.

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, pupils

those

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days

tends

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to bully

another student

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other students

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who doesn’t own any

luxury

products and make them

shame

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the shame

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of their school.

This

means that

,

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fancy

stuffs

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create

difference

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a difference

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between the pupils and

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one of the main reason

to

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bullying.

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a

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conclusion, I would say that owning popular brand

items

should only be accessible to those who earn money and

reasonable

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at their finance

managements

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in other words

adults. Other than

that

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that people

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peoples

who are younger

in

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their age would not fully understand the meaning of possessing

high end

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luxury

items

. People who made the money would understand its values.