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Nowadays many people prefer to buy famous brands of clothes, cars and other items. What are the reasons for this? Do you think it is a positive or negative development?

#people #brands #clothes #cars #items #development
These days many
peoples
 mostly adolescents tend to buy
high end
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luxury
items
 including
outer wears
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, shoes and purses.
Then
 why do people
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 more and more attention to overpriced possessions when there
is
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 many other affordable options available? From what I see, I would consider it as
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neither positive nor negative development.
Firstly
,
high end
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 brands
such
 as Gucci, Hermes and many others put value
first
 in their goods. By
this
 I mean, possessing a
long lasting
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 good quality product
it
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could save you from unnecessary shopping travels in the
further
 years, and making waste every few years that will do great damage to mother earth. Another great example of buying
luxury
items
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could never go out of fashion
trends
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. Nowadays, fast fashion trends are taking
huge
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stroll
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 in society that would only
last
 for a few months to
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 years.
This
 will lead to, mass clothing waste unlike high ends brands goods. As a counter-argument,
modern
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 days many naive and young
peoples
 are being more eager to buy those fancy
items
, to purchase what they want they would get loans
out of
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 banks or pressure their parents to purchase for them. As
a
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 explanation,
this
 generation we call
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generation where many adolescents make friends based on their wealth and popularity not on their personality or having things in common.
As a result
, many
peoples
 mostly teenagers believe owning and being clothed in priced
items
 will help them to become more valued in
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society.
Secondly
, pupils
those
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 days
tends
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 to bully
another student
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other students
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 who doesn’t own any
luxury
 products and make them
shame
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the shame
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 of their school.
This
 means that
,
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 fancy
stuffs
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 create
difference
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a difference
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 between the pupils and
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 one of the main reason
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 bullying.
As
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a
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conclusion, I would say that owning popular brand
items
 should only be accessible to those who earn money and
reasonable
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are reasonable
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 at their finance
managements
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in other words
 adults. Other than
that
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that people
those peoples
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peoples
 who are younger
in
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their age would not fully understand the meaning of possessing
high end
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luxury
items
. People who made the money would understand its values.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Conspicuous consumption
  • Brand loyalty
  • Elitism
  • Marketing strategies
  • Consumer psychology
  • Purchase behavior
  • Economic stratification
  • Sustainability
  • Luxury goods
  • Peer influence
  • Global marketing
  • Brand equity
  • Materialistic values
  • Status symbol
  • Quality perception
  • Investment piece
  • Influencer culture
  • Exclusivity
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