Some people believe that nowadays we have too many choices. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?
Choice
is the many alternatives way that Add an article
The choice
people
can decide in their life. In this
era, many people
tend to feel confused due to the existence of too many choices
that people
have. In my opinion, I strongly disagree on
Change preposition
with
this
statement. I believe that as many as possible choices
that people
have, giving more advevantages
outweigh the disadvantages in their lives. I base my argument on several reasons.
Correct your spelling
advantages
To begin
with, having many choices
in lifes
is an Correct your spelling
life
eassiness
and a dream that many Correct your spelling
easiness
people
in the past want to. In the 19th century, many people
could not select their destiny such
as the work they want to, the education field they like, even
the spouse they love. Correct word choice
or even
For example
, in Indonesian
context before the Independence, many Correct article usage
the Indonesian
people
in Indonesia since they born
will become Add a missing verb
were born
the
farmers until they passed away. Especially the women, in that era Correct article usage
apply
they
cannot choose their destiny unlikeCorrect pronoun usage
apply
to become
Change the verb form
becoming
the
housewives only. Correct article usage
apply
Hence
, contemporary society
own freedom to choose their life is more fortunate than Change noun form
society's
no
having freedom completely.
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not
Furthermore
, having many choices
in lifes
means Correct your spelling
life
life's
that
having many opportunities to try Correct word choice
apply
what
Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
best choice for Add a missing verb
is the
people
. In essence, lifes
is an occasion Correct your spelling
life
life's
to
trial and error on Change preposition
for
everythings
. Because of that too many Correct your spelling
everything
choices
is not the drawbacks
for Fix the agreement mistake
drawback
people
but it
is Correct pronoun usage
apply
the
grace for Correct article usage
a
human
Add an article
a human
the human
being
. Fix the agreement mistake
beings
For instance
, in some country which does not have freedom
to choose like North Korea, Add an article
the freedom
people
only have one opportunity to choose their job
. After this
opportunity, beside on
their enjoyment in their Change preposition
besides
job
, they can not change their job
until they die. Thus
, if they do failure
in their Replace the word
fail
job
then
they fired
by Add a missing verb
are fired
office
, so Add an article
the office
in
their entire life they will be jobless.
In conclusion, Change preposition
apply
have
many Wrong verb form
having
choices
in lifes
is the Graces and Luckiness for Correct your spelling
life
people
nowadays because it is an easiness and occasion to
trial and error for Change preposition
for
people
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