Some people say that in all levels of education too much time is spent on learning facts and not enough on learning practical skills. Do you agree or disagree?

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  • emphasize
  • detracts
  • proficiency
  • underrepresented
  • curricula
  • employability
  • workforce
  • technology-driven
  • creativity
  • problem-solving
  • theoretical
  • practical application
  • evolve
  • prioritizing
  • societal
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