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Should voting be compulsory for all citizens or people should have freedom to choose not to vote. What is your opinion?

#citizens #people #freedom #vote
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Modern civilizations are free to select their president and the government encourages
public
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the public
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 to
vote
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. While some
people
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 claim voting should be compulsory, others think they should have
freedom
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the freedom
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 to choose not to
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. In my opinion,
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 decisions about the government is an important duty of each
citizens
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citizen
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. Citizens' opinions are important to authorities who are able there should be an election to
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vote
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people
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 should
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 there could be an empty option for
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 who
could't
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couldn't
 decide
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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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