You are having a graduation party next Saturday night. You have invited 50 people to celebrate at an outdoor barbecue evening, which may continue till late night.

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to apologize for
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, which will happen on 30th May.
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I will celebrate
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graduate
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party
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with my friends from the university and invented them to my house.
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will
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time I will
celebrating
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with my friends. I early sorry for
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concern.I
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to end the party
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at 10 p.m and continue in
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restourant
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restaurant
. Dear neighbor want you
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in cafe and discuss for damage caused. Next time
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have a social
gatherning
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gathering
I will not cause any inconvenience for the
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i
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will invite fewer people. Please accept my apologize once again
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faithfully, Al Capone
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Include an introduction and conclusion

A conclusion is essential for IELTS writing task 2. It is more important than most people realise. You will be penalised for missing a conclusion in your IELTS essay.

The easiest paragraph to write in an essay is the conclusion paragraph. This is because the paragraph mostly contains information that has already been presented in the essay – it is just the repetition of some information written in the introduction paragraph and supporting paragraphs.

The conclusion paragraph only has 3 sentences:

  • Summary
  • Restatement of thesis
  • Prediction or recommendation

Example:

To summarize, a robotic teacher does not have the necessary disciple to properly give instructions to students and actually works to retard the ability of a student to comprehend new lessons. Therefore, it is clear that the idea of running a classroom completely by a machine cannot be supported. After thorough analysis on this subject, it is predicted that the adverse effects of the debate over technology-driven teaching will always be greater than the positive effects, and because of this, classroom teachers will never be substituted for technology.

Start your conclusion with a linking phrase. Here are some examples:

  • In conclusion
  • To conclude
  • To summarize
  • Finally
  • In a nutshell
  • In general

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