Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?.

There is no doubt that juveniles are facing huge pressure from

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academic, social and commercial

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of view nowadays. There are several reasons for

this

issue

such

as high competition, social status and

parent's

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expectations. In

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I will discuss these reasons and

also

give some solutions to curb

this

grave concern.

First

of all, competition among children has highly increased not only with their classmates but it has

also

gone up to the national level. In order to secure a seat in reputed universities, they start preparing from school days.

In addition

,

parents

are

also

expecting

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their child that they excel in all fields

such

as academics, sports and extracurricular activities and choose the career they want.

Thus

,

this

put pressure on them.

Besides

this

, nowadays youngsters are more likely to believe in showing off expensive things

such

as mobile, clothes, lifestyle and many more which no doubt makes others

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complex. To tackle

this

problem, education authorities should run some awareness programmes through media channels in order to educate students and

parents

as more pressure affects the physical and mental health of adolescents. They might feel depressed and all-time studying can lead to

weaken

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their eyesight.

Moreover

,

parents

should let their child decide their career choices rather than forcing them

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good at all activities. In conclusion,

although

competition among students is increasing and

parents

' expectations are the reasons

this

issue can be curbed by taking steps

such

as awareness programs and if

parents

let little

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decide their future.