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Children are facing more pressure nowadays from academic, social and commercial perspectives. What are the causes of these pressures and what measures should be taken to reduce these pressures?.

#children #pressure #perspectives #pressures #measures
There is no doubt that juveniles are facing huge pressure from
an
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academic, social and commercial
points
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 of view nowadays. There are several reasons for
this
 issue
such
 as high competition, social status and
parent's
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 expectations. In
this
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 I will discuss these reasons and
also
 give some solutions to curb
this
 grave concern.
First
 of all, competition among children has highly increased not only with their classmates but it has
also
 gone up to the national level. In order to secure a seat in reputed universities, they start preparing from school days.
In addition
,
parents
 are
also
 expecting
from
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their child that they excel in all fields
such
 as academics, sports and extracurricular activities and choose the career they want.
Thus
,
this
 put pressure on them.
Besides
this
, nowadays youngsters are more likely to believe in showing off expensive things
such
 as mobile, clothes, lifestyle and many more which no doubt makes others
one's feel
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 complex. To tackle
this
 problem, education authorities should run some awareness programmes through media channels in order to educate students and
parents
 as more pressure affects the physical and mental health of adolescents. They might feel depressed and all-time studying can lead to
weaken
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 their eyesight.
Moreover
,
parents
 should let their child decide their career choices rather than forcing them
being
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 good at all activities. In conclusion,
although
 competition among students is increasing and
parents
' expectations are the reasons
this
 issue can be curbed by taking steps
such
 as awareness programs and if
parents
 let little
one
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 decide their future.
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