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Band 3.5

It is beneficial for people to spend some time living in a country where they must speak a foreign language

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 I will be discussing the outcomes of
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 circumstance.
First
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 of all, other languages can have an
affect
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 on
ones
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 native speech. It is important to nurture and regard your native
language
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 because it tells a lot about a person and their
backround
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background
. Speaking with foreigners
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 can lead to mistakes when speaking in the native tongue, some phrases may become less used or
forgoten
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forgotten
.
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, anglicisms and international vocabulary in Lithuania are used
lot
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 in informal conversations and spaces. After spending time in
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 kind of environment it may be harder to express
thoughs
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thoughts
 in
lithuanian
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 in a correct and fluent way.
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, accents may develop if vernacular
language
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 is not
practiced
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 regularly. It is quite simple to tell apart someone who applies a certain
language
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 daily from a person who does not convey in that same
language
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 often.
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 can lead to insecurity and
self confidence
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isuess
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issues
 when communicating due to poorly
frased
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phrased
framed
statments
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statements
, an accent or similar patterns.
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, living in a country with
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an
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 unfamiliar
language
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 can help to practice
ones
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 adaptational skills and educate more deeply about the culture and lifestyle of the area.
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, the need to speak with others encourages
to
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 learn
quicker
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. The way of speaking
further
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 tells a lot about the country,
particular
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 sayings and expressions. All in all, it depends on a person and their preference, the way they can and are willing to push themselves and adapt to a new habitat.

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  • Paragraph 1 - Introduction
    • Sentence 1 - Background statement
    • Sentence 2 - Detailed background statement
    • Sentence 3 - Thesis
    • Sentence 4 - Outline sentence
  • Paragraph 2 - First supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 3 - Second supporting paragraph
    • Sentence 1 - Topic sentence
    • Sentence 2 - Example
    • Sentence 3 - Discussion
    • Sentence 4 - Conclusion
  • Paragraph 4 - Conclusion
    • Sentence 1 - Summary
    • Sentence 2 - Restatement of thesis
    • Sentence 3 - Prediction or recommendation

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