Scientists believe that computers will become more intelligent than human beings. Some people find it positive while others think it is a negative development. Discuss both views and give your own opinion.
The
technology
revolution Replace the word
technological
bacame
an essential part of our lives, today world relies Correct your spelling
became
in
work Change preposition
on
acheivment
on Correct your spelling
achievement
computers
, they save time and effort and garantee
a high level of precision in work, and according to that many questions and fears Correct your spelling
guarantee
appears
and began to be asked loudly about the replacement of human being by these Correct subject-verb agreement
appear
computers
.
A huge population of peple
find Correct your spelling
people
this
machine development will have so many negative impacts, there
point of view is so understood, because it seems very Replace the word
their
clearly
that Replace the word
clear
computers
will lead people to lose their jobs
, sence
Correct your spelling
since
the
development of them is so rapid and their Change the word
their
intelligent
rate is increasing with time. one of the obvious facts in Replace the word
intelligence
business
world, Add an article
the business
that
leaders and Add a missing verb
is that
companies
founders look to cut off Change the noun form
company
money
and looking for more layoff through companies, and Add an article
the money
thats
mean a Correct your spelling
that's
that
desaster
for the employees.
In my Correct your spelling
disaster
openion
, I strongly believe that these machines will never be able to Correct your spelling
opinion
relace
the human beingCorrect your spelling
replace
,
because we create Remove the comma
apply
it
, and we can control Correct pronoun usage
them
it
, there is no way that they will have the complete ability to replace us, Correct pronoun usage
them
instead
those machine
will help the community to create so many new Change the determiner
that machine
those machines
jobs
. it is true that there will be so many jobs
will
never Correct pronoun usage
that will
be
needed to be doneUnnecessary verb
apply
by
, Change preposition
apply
on the other hand
, many new jobs
will became
needed like working in Change the verb form
become
developing
, programming, data science, and testing Replace the word
development
jobs
, and this
will not only for these related to IT field, but when computers
bacome
more Correct your spelling
become
intellegent
, the rate of Correct your spelling
intelligent
acheivement
will increase, that means more projects will Correct your spelling
achievement
begins
in Change the verb form
begin
defferent
fields, and more Correct your spelling
different
jobs
opportunities will be available.
In conclusion, we should set in mind that these computers
been
founded to make Add a missing verb
have been
humans
life Change noun form
humans'
human's
more
easier, so Change the word
apply
serve
humanity should be Wrong verb form
serving
number
one Correct article usage
the number
priorety
, and efforts should be oriented Correct your spelling
priority
for
that, Change preposition
toward
copmuters
are not our masters, but humanity slaves.Correct your spelling
computers
commuters
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