Some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of studying then to school. Do you think the advantages of this overweight the disadvantages.

These days, there are different types of

education

system teaching.

One

of them is that

home

education

is being preferred by more parents rather than

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learning within

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premises. Even though there are some advantages to

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, they do not compensate for all drawbacks, meaning formal

education

must remain a preferred choice.

One

of the advantages is that if

children

are taught individually, it is more effective than

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school

education

.

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, it is comfortable

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such

as the child

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hard in the process of individual

education

and

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not get distracted

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his peers during the lesson, not only

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hard but

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feel independent, they can express their opinion without shame. As an example,

one

of my nieces, which

study

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education

. Compare him to my niece who attends public

school

. There are many differences between them.

Also

, my niece who goes to a public

school

can not express her opinion in public, but my other niece can express

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clearly without any fear.

One

of the disadvantages is that

children

who

study

alone become isolated,

as a result

of which they can not develop an outgoing personality character, so they can not freely communicate with their peers.

In other words

, understanding how to cooperate with

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and communication skills in the same age groups are

also

essential for each child.

For instance

, teachers organize different kinds of activities related

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study

in

school

.

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children

will

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in by

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time

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. In conclusion, I believe it is disadvantages overweight the benefits that teaching

children

at

home

rather than sending

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to

school

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because

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children

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access many professional

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