Some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of studying then to school. Do you think the advantages of this overweight the disadvantages.

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of them is that
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is being preferred by more parents rather than
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premises. Even though there are some advantages to
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, they do not compensate for all drawbacks, meaning formal
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must remain a preferred choice.
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of the advantages is that if
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are taught individually, it is more effective than
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.
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, it is comfortable
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as the child
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hard in the process of individual
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and
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not get distracted
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his peers during the lesson, not only
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hard but
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feel independent, they can express their opinion without shame. As an example,
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of my nieces, which
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. Compare him to my niece who attends public
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. There are many differences between them.
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, my niece who goes to a public
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can not express her opinion in public, but my other niece can express
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clearly without any fear.
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of the disadvantages is that
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who
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alone become isolated,
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of which they can not develop an outgoing personality character, so they can not freely communicate with their peers.
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, understanding how to cooperate with
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and communication skills in the same age groups are
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essential for each child.
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, teachers organize different kinds of activities related
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in by
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. In conclusion, I believe it is disadvantages overweight the benefits that teaching
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at
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rather than sending
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to
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recourse and get collective experiences
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Homeschooling
  • Tailored educational approaches
  • One-on-One Attention
  • Safe Learning Environment
  • Cost-Effective
  • Family Bonding
  • Limited Socialization
  • Potential Knowledge Gaps
  • Regulatory Challenges
  • Dependence on Parental Commitment
  • Limited Extracurricular Opportunities
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