You live in a room in college which you share with another student. However, threre are many problems with this arrangement and you find it very difficult to work. Write a letter to the accommodation officer at the college. In the letter, describe the situation explain your problems and why it is difficult to work *say what kind of accommodation you would prefer

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Dear Sir or Madam, I'm writing to let you know that I am very dissatisfied with my current living arrangement. My roommate has become increasingly intolerable, and it is affecting my studies negatively to the point where I'm sleeping in class and scoring low on tests. Let me explain my situation. The issue started when my housemate moved in almost two months ago. It was fine before that as my

last

roommate was a quiet and considerate person. But my current housemate plays loud computer games on speaker, almost till the

first

light of dawn, and refuses to maintain the basic cleanliness of the room. Would you kindly transfer me or my housemate to another room

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I would highly prefer to live with someone who is more mindful towards others

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and conforms to uphold basic hygienic conditions which do not attract rodents to the place where we study and sleep. Thank you for your consideration. Yours faithfully, Abuzar

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7 paragraphs

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 6.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 9.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

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