Some people believe that developments in the field of artificial intelligence will have a positive impact on our lives in the near future. Others, by contrast, are worried that we are not prepared for a world in which computers are more intelligent than humans. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion.

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In modern times, the issue of being hungry day by day has become highly controversial. People who are living in an age where AI technology is used in agriculture regularly but facing a shortage of food which makes the situation worse in some
countries
. In
this
essay, I will discuss a few of the problems and give some proper solutions for development in the agriculture
field
. On the one hand, there are two main reasons why these problems are occurring.
Firstly
, lack of knowledge of how to
use
those advanced technologies in
such
fields. To be precise, the government is purchasing but they don't have an adept person in
this
area.
This
is why
countries
that are not able to
use
them and now suffering from food diseases.
Secondly
, the
countries
who are experts in
this
field
and producing crops are selling massive amounts to other
countries
.
in addition
, poor
countries
are not capable to purchase by giving high cost every time. So, people are dying every year from suffering
this
situation.
On the other hand
, there are a few solutions for these cases that government needs to take a few actions
such
as hiring skilled workers, teaching the usage of technology, giving facilities in the agricultural
field
, etc. If authority gives their concern to hiring foreign experts
then
better farming can happen.
For example
, People who know using tech in an agricultural
field
then
they will
use
it in a proper
way
. In
this
way
, Productivity will be magnified. Another
way
is that government can give better facilities in the farming
field
, so those who are likely to avoid now give their concern on it. So they will choose
this
subject by taking solid knowledge using a didactic
way
. In conclusion,
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human being needs to consider the importance of
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technology in agriculture. In that
way
, it can be possible to diminish the death rate.
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