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Schools should not force children to learn a foreign language. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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It is suggested that
children
 should not be forced to learn a foreign
language
 by schools. In my opinion, I partly agree with
this
 viewpoint. On the one hand, learning foreign languages have many benefits. It can help
children
 to communicate with foreigners and know more about their country’s
custom
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customs
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 and traditions.
In addition
, knowing a foreign
language
 can be a priority when they apply for a job.
For example
, between a person who can speak at least one foreign
language
 and a person who just can speak
mother
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their mother
his mother
her mother
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 tongue, companies will actually choose the person knowing at least one foreign
language
. So families and schools should encourage
children
 to learn a foreign
language
.
On the other hand
, schools had better not force
children
 to learn other countries’
language
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languages
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.
With
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For
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 some
children
, learning a foreign
language
 is very boring with them. They feel it
difficult
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is difficult
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 to learn
this
 subject. So in the day when they have to learn
foreign
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a foreign
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language
 subject, they might find a way to stay at home and
do
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not go to school that day.
This
 is not good for their education.
Moreover
, if he decides to stay
at
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in
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 his hometown all
life
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his life
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, it is quite useless to learn another
language
. In conclusion, I think learning a foreign
language
 has many advantages, but
school
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schools
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needn’t force them to study
this
.
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