Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The importance of paying

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is increasing by leaps and bounds. But, many pupils believe that it is not sufficient, individuals have more responsibilities as a member of

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. In my, opinion the position of

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who

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appears to be more rational. In

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elaborate

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positive and negative effects of

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trend and

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will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

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explain

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argument.

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, the most preponderant fact is the development of the nation is replies on

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and the

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is doing

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task superbly. Another pivotal aspect is the

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is fascinated by others products

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as attires, cars, and,

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apartments

. the government is charged heavy GST on them. Moving

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, it is pertinent to mention that a survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford in London revealed that UK economic growth

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if the

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is denied

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pay

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.

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, one sure example is that celebrities, politicians, and,

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contributed

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of

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rather than others.

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, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of

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trend. Even so, the most alarming one is poverty and corruption are

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major curses and we required new methods and skills to combat these problems. While, in

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modern era, the

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is suffering from Cronin diseases

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as Cancer, Tuberculosis, as well as

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. Health care is not developed yet and people died in large numbers.

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, namely, poor countries

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India, Pakistan and Nepal have no fundamental resources and

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-world nations pupils perhaps help these regions.

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, drugs and alcohol

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diminishing

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society and individuals can take responsibility to destroy these products from the market.

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, the article published in the eminent newspaper Hindustan Times depicts the

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of

America

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alter affair of obesity. due to 99

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peoples

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of peoples

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are

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overweight. To sum up, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion, that the importance of paying

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is instrumental indeed.

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, the potential drawbacks of

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issue should not be overlooked either.