Some people think paying taxes is a big enough contribution to their society, while others think people have more responsibilities as members of society than only paying taxes. Discuss both views and give your opinion.

The importance of paying
taxes
is increasing by leaps and bounds. But, many pupils believe that it is not sufficient, individuals have more responsibilities as a member of
community
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. In my, opinion the position of
people's
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who
paying
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taxes
appears to be more rational. In
this
, essay we will
further
elaborate
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positive and negative effects of
this
trend and
thus
will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will
further
explain
this
argument.
Although
, the most preponderant fact is the development of the nation is replies on
taxes
and the
population
is doing
this
task superbly. Another pivotal aspect is the
population
is fascinated by others products
such
as attires, cars, and,
appartments
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apartments
. the government is charged heavy GST on them. Moving
further
, it is pertinent to mention that a survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford in London revealed that UK economic growth
collapse
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if the
population
is denied
to
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pay
taxes
.
Additionally
, one sure example is that celebrities, politicians, and,
businessman
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contributed
double
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amount
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of
taxes
rather than others.
However
, there are some pitfalls that negate these arguments and which can certainly overwhelm the potential influence of
this
trend. Even so, the most alarming one is poverty and corruption are
a
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major curses and we required new methods and skills to combat these problems. While, in
this
modern era, the
population
is suffering from Cronin diseases
such
as Cancer, Tuberculosis, as well as
brain
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tumor
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. Health care is not developed yet and people died in large numbers.
Moreover
, namely, poor countries
in other words
India, Pakistan and Nepal have no fundamental resources and
first
-world nations pupils perhaps help these regions.
Similarly
, drugs and alcohol
is
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diminishing
the
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society and individuals can take responsibility to destroy these products from the market.
In addition
, the article published in the eminent newspaper Hindustan Times depicts the
population
of
America
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alter affair of obesity. due to 99
per-cent
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peoples
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are
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overweight. To sum up, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion, that the importance of paying
taxes
is instrumental indeed.
Nevertheless
, the potential drawbacks of
this
issue should not be overlooked either.
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