Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. What is the reason for this? it is a negative or positive development.
Playing games is
the
fun activity for Correct article usage
a
children
since it Use synonyms
require
less energy and Change the verb form
requires
easy
to reach. Add a missing verb
is easy
However
, they not doing enough physical activity, Linking Words
such
as Linking Words
sports
, and perhaps Use synonyms
complaining
about that. The technological advance Wrong verb form
complain
has
Add the particle
tohas
lead
Wrong verb form
led
this
generation to Linking Words
this
situation when Linking Words
children
Use synonyms
is
no longer likely to play any Change the verb form
are
sports
. It Use synonyms
is
definitely will decrease Unnecessary verb
apply
child's
productivity and health.
Online games that can Correct article usage
a child's
be access
from Change the verb form
be accessed
computer
, laptop, or other devices Correct article usage
a computer
is
one of the favourite activities for Correct subject-verb agreement
are
children
to Use synonyms
spent
their time outside Change the form of the verb
spend
Change preposition
of study
study
at school. According to them, finishing the mission and Replace the word
studying
get
Wrong verb form
getting
higher
rank Correct article usage
a higher
from
those Change preposition
in
game
Fix the agreement mistake
games
is
Unnecessary verb
apply
sattisfied
them. Correct your spelling
satisfies
For example
, playing play station at home more Linking Words
easy
than playing Replace the word
easily
basket ball
Correct your spelling
basketball
at
the yard. In factChange preposition
in
that
Correct word choice
apply
,
Remove the comma
apply
children
without any guidance will sit and play all day long. Use synonyms
Thus
, if Linking Words
this
unpractical habit Linking Words
keep
Change the verb form
keeps
happens
, Wrong verb form
happening
the
adults should be more Correct article usage
apply
worry
about their child's Replace the word
worried
developments
.
Fix the agreement mistake
development
In other words
, it has far Linking Words
drawback
from the main aim of playing Fix the agreement mistake
drawbacks
Correct article usage
the game
game
, which is Fix the agreement mistake
games
to
Correct your spelling
so
refreshing
and Wrong verb form
refresh
increasing
logical Wrong verb form
increase
thingking
. Correct your spelling
thinking
Firstly
, they will be unproductive because they avoiding do any Linking Words
sports
that have a great impact Use synonyms
to
their growing process as Change preposition
on
childrens
. Correct your spelling
children
Secondly
, staying in front of the computer all day long will lead to several diseases as it is affecting eyes performance, bone development, and others. Linking Words
Children
around 5-17 age ranges Use synonyms
are
still need high Unnecessary verb
apply
frequence
of physical movement because Correct your spelling
frequency
that
ages are the golden age to define their body shapes and structures.
In conclusion, the fast pace of technological development not only give a beneficial impactChange the determiner
those
,
but Remove the comma
apply
also
a drawback that Linking Words
become
an issue for Change the verb form
becomes
Use synonyms
children
development. The convenience Change noun form
children's
in
accessing the game had been closing the Change preposition
of
childs'
intention to do physical Change noun form
child's
sports
. In my opinion, Use synonyms
this
unacceptable habit should be Linking Words
control
and Wrong verb form
controlled
guide
by Wrong verb form
guided
the
adults to make sure they have enough time to Correct article usage
apply
exploring
outside and Wrong verb form
explore
excersizing
.Correct your spelling
exercising
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