Nowadays children mostly spend time playing computer games rather than sports. What is the reason for this? it is a negative or positive development.

Playing games is

the

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a

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fun activity for

children

since it

require

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requires

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less energy and

easy

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is easy

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to reach.

However

, they not doing enough physical activity,

such

as

sports

, and perhaps

complaining

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complain

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about that. The technological advance

has

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tohas

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lead

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led

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this

generation to

this

situation when

children

is

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are

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no longer likely to play any

sports

. It

is

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apply

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definitely will decrease

child's

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a child's

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productivity and health. Online games that can

be access

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be accessed

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from

computer

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a computer

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, laptop, or other devices

is

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are

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one of the favourite activities for

children

to

spent

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spend

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their time outside

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of study

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study

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studying

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at school. According to them, finishing the mission and

get

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getting

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higher

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a higher

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rank

from

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in

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those

game

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games

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is

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apply

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sattisfied

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satisfies

them.

For example

, playing play station at home more

easy

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easily

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than playing

basket ball

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basketball

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at

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in

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the yard. In fact

that

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apply

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,

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children

without any guidance will sit and play all day long.

Thus

, if

this

unpractical habit

keep

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keeps

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happens

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happening

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,

the

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apply

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adults should be more

worry

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worried

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about their child's

developments

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development

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.

In other words

, it has far

drawback

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drawbacks

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from the main aim of playing

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the game

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game

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games

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, which is

to

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so

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refreshing

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refresh

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and

increasing

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increase

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logical

thingking

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thinking

.

Firstly

, they will be unproductive because they avoiding do any

sports

that have a great impact

to

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on

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their growing process as

childrens

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children

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.

Secondly

, staying in front of the computer all day long will lead to several diseases as it is affecting eyes performance, bone development, and others.

Children

around 5-17 age ranges

are

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still need high

frequence

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frequency

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of physical movement because

that

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those

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ages are the golden age to define their body shapes and structures. In conclusion, the fast pace of technological development not only give a beneficial impact

,

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but

also

a drawback that

become

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becomes

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an issue for

children

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children's

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development. The convenience

in

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of

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accessing the game had been closing the

childs'

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child's

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intention to do physical

sports

. In my opinion,

this

unacceptable habit should be

control

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controlled

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and

guide

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guided

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by

the

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apply

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adults to make sure they have enough time to

exploring

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explore

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outside and

excersizing

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exercising

.