Students are becoming more and more reliant on the internet. While the internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its and its use for educational purpose should be restricted. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

In

this

modern era, many learners

are relies

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on the

internet

because it is efficient but

they

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it

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has numerous drawbacks

such

as addiction, and, loss of creativity . In my, opinion the position of the

internet

appears to be more rational. It is reducing

potential

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powers of children

such

as creativity, and, decision-making skills. Yes, I agree with

this

ideology. In

this

, essay we will address the negative effects of

this

trend and

thus

will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

further

explain

this

argument but the most preponderant fact is the

internet

has multifarious information and knowledge,

therefore

, perhaps should be used for awful websites in the future,

such

as porn sites, and, sexual content. Another pivotal aspect is an addiction to the

internet

rising rapidly and it is more hazardous compared to drugs and alcohol owing to the diminishing brain's nervous system as well as the main reason for weak eye sides.

In addition

, the article published in the eminent newspaper Hindustan Times depicts that youngsters are blackmailed by the

internet

because hackers steal precious data.

Similarly

,

for

instance

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poor countries individuals sell their prestigious wealth to use the

internet

. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems is that it is destroy the learning skills of students owing to learners

tap

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the screen and everything Available in the

second

.

Besides

,

cost

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of the

internet

is expensive and

learner's

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learners

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steal

wealth

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of their parents.

Furthermore

, fraud is the main

causes

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a survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford revealed that billions of dollars

theft

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by the

internet

.

On the other hand

,

traditional

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schooling system is more adequate rather than the

internet

. To sum up, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion that the drawbacks of the

internet

is

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too dire.