Students are becoming more and more reliant on the internet. While the internet is convenient, it has many negative effects and its and its use for educational purpose should be restricted. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

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modern era, many learners

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on the

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because it is efficient but

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has numerous drawbacks

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as addiction, and, loss of creativity . In my, opinion the position of the

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appears to be more rational. It is reducing

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powers of children

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as creativity, and, decision-making skills. Yes, I agree with

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ideology. In

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, essay we will address the negative effects of

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trend and

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will lead to a logical conclusion. There are myriads of reasons which will

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explain

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argument but the most preponderant fact is the

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has multifarious information and knowledge,

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, perhaps should be used for awful websites in the future,

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as porn sites, and, sexual content. Another pivotal aspect is an addiction to the

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rising rapidly and it is more hazardous compared to drugs and alcohol owing to the diminishing brain's nervous system as well as the main reason for weak eye sides.

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, the article published in the eminent newspaper Hindustan Times depicts that youngsters are blackmailed by the

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because hackers steal precious data.

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,

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poor countries individuals sell their prestigious wealth to use the

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. Probing ahead, one of the main underlying reasons stems is that it is destroy the learning skills of students owing to learners

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the screen and everything Available in the

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.

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,

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of the

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is expensive and

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learners

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steal

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the wealth

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of their parents.

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, fraud is the main

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a survey conducted by the prestigious university Oxford revealed that billions of dollars

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by the

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.

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,

traditional

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schooling system is more adequate rather than the

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. To sum up, according to the argument aforementioned above, one can reach the conclusion that the drawbacks of the

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is

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too dire.