Some people believe that school children should not be given homework by their teachers, whereas others argue that homework plays an important role in the education of children. Discuss both of these views and give your own opinion. Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Practise makes a person perfect, well daily homework makes a student miserable. Many people
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that extra
school
work
should not be given to students after regular classes, and some argue that
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extra class works
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a vital role in the academics of a schooler.I personally
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agree that a child should not have
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work
at
home
. In
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essay, I will support my point and explain from both views. Doing
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homework
can be more
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stressful
after a long day at
school
. Especially, for students who are participating in extra curriculum programs after regular
school
hours. It is really important for a child to spend quality time with their family, as it will help them to communicate their daily
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activities
or
school
incidents with their parents.
Also
, it will help
school
children's mental health.
On the other hand
,
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work
at
home
helps many
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to exercise daily taught subjects , and
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them to keep stay focused and updated with the
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topics. For
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with slow learning
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will be more useful,
this
is because they can catch up
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concepts as they practise more at their
home
. In conclusion, extra revision
work
at
home
can
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exhausting
for some students, whereas for others it will be
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practise
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. Both have equal
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benefits
. In my opinion,
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homework
Homeworks
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for
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, because it is the
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responsibilty
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responsibility
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a child have understood
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lessons that are taught,
accordingly
they should arrange extra classes at
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institutions for the lessons that are unclear to a student.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Instills discipline
  • Deepen understanding
  • Independent learning
  • Reinforcement
  • Parental involvement
  • Curriculum insight
  • Burnout
  • Student stress
  • Leisure time
  • Relevance of assignments
  • Project-based learning
  • Interactive learning
  • Individual learning styles
  • Conducive study environment
  • Homework policy
  • Balanced approach
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