some people dislike changes in their society and in their own lives, and want things to stay the same. Why do some people want things to stay the same? Why should change be regarded as something positive?
There is no denying the fact that some
people
have a fear of change
in their society and own lives and want things
to stay the same. This
essay will discuss the reasons behind this
phenomenon and why are often consider change
as a positive impact.
To begin
with, there are many causes for people
that they did not want to change
and dislike.
Firstly
, many people
like the idea of an easy life such
as adaptation and mitigation so they choose the comfort zone. In other words
, doing the same things
and activities may reduce the risk of mistakes and failure. In addition
, some people
do not have the motivation to have new experiences so they are satisfied with their own things
and have no sufficient ambition. For example
, my own brother had an offer from a huge organization however
he refused the offer because of no passion and was afraid of failure.
In terms of change
considered a positive thing, because if you learn something new you will gain a strong benefit even if you fail in learning. It is also
possible to say that when you change
something to another thing it leads you to receive experiences from your mistakes. Moreover
, learning new things
may assist you to enjoy life and discover new skills inside you. For instance
, Elon Mask one of the most successful people
in the world his commercial space flight has exploded in the air three times however
he did not give up and now his programme works.
In conclusion, there are many reasons beyond people
who hate change
. It is also
true that changes are often regarded as something great.Submitted by naif.waleead on
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task achievement
Try to avoid using informal phrases like 'there is no denying the fact' in an academic essay.
coherence cohesion
Ensure that all examples and ideas presented support the main argument directly and are clearly related to the topic sentences.
task achievement
Develop all ideas fully to enhance clarity and comprehensiveness of the response.
coherence cohesion
The essay provides an introduction and conclusion, clearly outlining the topic and summarizing the discussion.
task achievement
Relevant examples, such as mentioning Elon Musk's experiences, are used to support the argument for why change is positive.