You recently did a short cookery course. The cookery school has asked for your feedback on this course. Write a letter to the course director at the cookery school. In your letter, describe what you enjoyed about the course say how much cooking you've done since the course suggest another cookery course you'd like the school to offer Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing
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letter regards to the baking
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I've recently taken. I wanted to share some of the experiences I had during
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program.
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, I am thrilled to share that I enjoyed the
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thoroughly and it makes me feel disheartened that it ended so soon. I admire the instructor Mr Gupta and his teaching skills.
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, in my opinion, the
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structure was designed really well and covered all the aspects of baking.
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, I feel proud to say that I have been making desserts for my family almost every day. Everyone loves the unique taste and recommends I open the bakery shop.
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, I feel it's too early for me as I need to explore more areas of cooking.
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, I was thinking of learning some Italian cuisine and I know many who find it very fascinating and would love to enrol in
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course
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if offered by the school. So, how about introducing
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course
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in 2023? Please let me know your thoughts. Awaiting your positive response. Best Regards, Riya
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