You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter • ask about the school • say what kind of accommodation you want • mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

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Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing

you

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to ask a few questions about the

school

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. One of my friends gave me

a brief information

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about

school

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but I need more detailed information about certain things.

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thing I would like to know is the accommodation type. I usually would rather

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stay in a single room but

this

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time I would like to stay with a local family. Because I would like to improve my language skills. At the same time, I wanted to see the daily life of an English family.

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language course can be a great opportunity for me to both improve my English and learn about a new culture. I

also

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want to know if

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school

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the school

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can help me to find

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apply

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accommodation close to the

school

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. I know that

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there

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lot of events for students at the

school

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. If the place I live would not

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close to the

school

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, I will be wasting my time on the way

which

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I simply hate traffic jams and long commutes. I am looking forward to

receive

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a message from you. Yours Faithfully,

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Rural

Abdulsamad.

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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 9.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 4.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 4.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 8.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

7 paragraphs

187 words

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