You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are planning to go and study English at a school overseas. You would like some information about their courses. Write a letter to the school. In your letter • ask about the school • say what kind of accommodation you want • mention any special requests you have (for example diet).

Dear Sir/Madam, I am writing
you
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to ask a few questions about the
school
. One of my friends gave me
a brief information
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about
school
but I need more detailed information about certain things.
First
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thing I would like to know is the accommodation type. I usually would rather
to
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stay in a single room but
this
time I would like to stay with a local family. Because I would like to improve my language skills. At the same time, I wanted to see the daily life of an English family.
This
language course can be a great opportunity for me to both improve my English and learn about a new culture. I
also
want to know if
school
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the school
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can help me to find
an
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accommodation close to the
school
. I know that
,
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there
a
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lot of events for students at the
school
. If the place I live would not
be
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close to the
school
, I will be wasting my time on the way
which
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I simply hate traffic jams and long commutes. I am looking forward to
receive
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a message from you. Yours Faithfully,
Tural
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Rural
Abdulsamad.
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