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More and more students are choosing to study at colleges and universities in a foreign country. Do the benefits of studying abroad outweigh the drawbacks?

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in
this
 modern era, students are now selecting colleges and universities for higher studies in an overseas
country
. pursuing certificates from a foreign
country
 as a student can get a lot of facilities that are more beneficial in their future life. From my ,perspective there are several reasons to study abroad by ignoring the drawbacks. On the one hand, studying abroad gives some knowledge
besides
 getting a degree.
Firstly
, anyone who gets a new experience that can provide some help in the job sector. To be precise, New experiences can magnify the success of a company.
For example
. use some technic
that is
 nowadays used by international industries.
Secondly
,
country's
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people
 will get more benefits from other
people
 that are studying in another
country
.
This
 is because, when students finish their studies, after landing their soil they will innovate new businesses where jobless
people
 will able to get employed. In
this
 ,way a
country
 won't suffer from unemployment.
On the other hand
, overseas students are able to learn new things that are not getting from their homeland. As a
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result they will fulfil their own aims by getting better facilities. The
further
 point in favour of that overseas degree will give better priority if moves another
country
 or seeking any kind of jobs.So they don't have to face haphazard, waste of time, other
people
 help etc In conclusion, doing struggle by studying outside of the homeland can be difficult but the hard work will be paid off in other ways, that can change anyone's entire life and the
next
 generation.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • opportunities
  • personal growth
  • development
  • exposure
  • diverse
  • perspectives
  • language skills
  • job prospects
  • adapting
  • environment
  • financial considerations
  • costs
  • homesickness
  • social isolation
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