Do you agree or disagree with the following statement? Universities should give the same amount of money to their students’ sport activities as they give to the university libraries. Use specific reasons and examples to support your opinion.

It is difficult to understand how much cash universities should give for different

activities

. In my humble opinion,

this

educational institution should allow having more

money

for sports because they are more important for younger, who already study on their own. In fact, sports are useful for body and growth. To commence with, we have to consider that people must understand the importance of keeping their bodies in a good state. So, if universities give

money

to practical

activities

is good. In fact, in

this

way

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they can improve their health without spending their own

money

. So, they can study because they attend university, but at the same time have a space in which they can do some

activities

and improve their physical qualities.

Moreover

, practising sports can show how important

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some values, like collaboration, friendship, determination,

sacrifice

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and sacrifice

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and maybe the most important

that is

understanding our own values as a person. Learning these values means being better.

For instance

, if a student starts to practice soccer, she/he can understand how to adjust to other people and how

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in a group with a common aim and work for it. In conclusion, even if we all know that libraries are essential structures, universities already offer the possibility to study so it would be better if a bigger amount of

money

is given to physical

activities

instead

of in the library