many cities have serious problem of trafic congestion. what are the causes of this trend and what are some solutions.

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it is certainly true that urban areas face critical conditions of
road
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jams. after providing a careful analysis of why the problem has risen sharply in
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shall suggest a number of ways to tackle the problem.
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evils. there are a few reasons which
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blamed for it. the
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main reason is
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rules
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are not followed by human beings. every person is in hurry and they drive a vehicle at high speed, which is not required on that particular
road
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they didn`t give left and right
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for line changes while another person was aware of , his/her was going to line change. even
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in the junction
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can`t wait for the green line, they drive the wrong side for fear of authorities
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the accident will happen and the full
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, as per times of India Hindi In china a major accident
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happened in 1990 because of over speeding and more than 20 cars were crashed in
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that time constantly.
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were stuck
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in
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almost
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10km
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significant reason is masses are migrating from
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rural areas to metro cities for living and
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better futures.
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the population rate is going high in cities. they all have their own private vehicles. they didn`t travel by public transport as they think by private vehicle, they went to
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on time.
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,
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problem can be looked after well by several precautionary measures. The
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and foremost solution is
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government
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can introduce new
traffic
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rules
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. which are followed very strictly. even
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need to implement
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fines
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by a new technology system. For a good example, the Dubai
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introduces new
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technology, authorities put cameras on single roads and streets. they are not gives warning to
people
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about the
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. they put fines on
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without any notice and if again same things happened terminate their
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driving's
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license
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also
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government
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has a very clear vision policy for national development.
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are an ist priority even if they belong to the royal family,
rules
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are the same for individuals. some other measures like public transport and private vehicles polling. the
government
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required
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to improve public transport and request with citizens avoid using private vehicles. on the one hand,
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can do carpooling. means
people
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can share
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private
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vehicle vehicles
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with colleagues and friends for going to one destination
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as the office, travel or academic. it can
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be implemented to reduce the severe effect of the measures problems. conclusion, to conclude
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there are several legitimate concerns regarding
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jams. if the above-mentioned steps are taken into consideration, none seems insurmountable.

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