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Some people believe that everyone has the right to receive university education，so the government should make it free to all people regardless of their financial background. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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There has long been argued
that
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whether
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 higher
education
 should be subsidised or not. Certain people believe that if universities provide free
education
, it might result in economic and social development while in
other's
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others'
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 opinion, individuals should bear the cost of
further
education
 as it negatively
effects
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affects
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annual
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the annual
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 budget of a developing or underdeveloped country. In
this
 context,
I
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my
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 family believe that higher studies should be paid attention
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 the authority along with primary and secondary
education
. To start with, at the under graduation level, a student
get
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gets
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 more opportunity to explore,
to
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build his or her own idea and
finally
 to be
Master
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a Master
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 in a particular area.
For instance
, if an individual chooses Computer Science after his or her higher secondary, the person actually can be an IT expert and serve the nation. But
unfortunatel
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unfortunately
, it is often seen that the student has to drop out because the cost of getting admission
in
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 a University is higher than his or her income.
As a result
 each year countries lose
doctor
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doctors
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, engineers or other professionals.
Likewise
, a highly educated person leads the nation. Apart from
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economic growth, learning contributes
in
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to
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 community development.
For example
, when people attain
unversity
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university
, the rate of dowry, domestic violence etc.
are
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 gradually decreased.
In contrast
, free universities sometimes fail to generate quality
education
 due to
large
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a large
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 number of participants.
As a result
, educated unemployed are rising.
Furthermore
, allocating budget to ensure higher
education
 is often higher than the text returns in developing or underdeveloped countries. To conclude, higher studies
paves
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 the way
of
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for
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 new
researchs
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research
researchers
 Innovations and ideas, if it is
subsidied
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subsidised
subsidized
, it accelerates the economy.
Although
 ensuring jobs for those still remains
as
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a challenge to the government.
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Topic Vocabulary:
  • Higher education
  • Economic status
  • Potential
  • Workforce
  • Innovation
  • Economic growth
  • Citizenry
  • Social inequalities
  • Fiscal limitations
  • Funding models
  • Over-enrollment
  • Admissions
  • Merit
  • Personal investment
  • Committed
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