You are due to start new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employeer. In your letter: • Explain your situation • Describe your problems • Tell him or her when you think you can start.

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Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing

this

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letter to you to tell my problems. You know, I am

due to

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start my new job next week.

However

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, I will not be able to

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. Because I have some problems.

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Saturday I went to the mountains to see their beautiful scenes with my family. We spent time there

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wonderful.

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, I injured my legs on our second day.

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we went to the hospital. The doctor gave me advice that I should not go out and

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till next week.

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this

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reason, I cannot go to

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this

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week. I will able to

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next Monday. I would certainly be interested in hearing from you soon. I look forward to your reply and a resolution to my problem. I hope you will resolve the matter to our satisfaction. If you need any other details, please feel free to write to me. Thank you for your time and consideration. Yours sincerely, Dream

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Rashidova S.

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Structure your letter

A letter needs to be written using a proper format, including the following:

A greeting (Dear sir/madam, Dear John, Dear Mr. Smith)
The main body (consisting of paragraphs for each part of the letter)
A closing (Yours sincerely, Yours faithfully, Best wishes, Kind regards, Love)

When writing a letter as part of the IELTS General Training Writing Task 1, it is important to include the bullet points presented to you in the question.

All three bullet points need to be presented. And remember that some bullet points contain more than one element. So, make sure to watch for ‘and’ and plurals.

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meeting the goal of 3 or fewer
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Overall Band Score

Coherence and Cohesion: 4.0

Logical structure

Single idea per paragraph

Greeting and closing

Accurate linking words

Variety in linking words

Lexical resource: 7.0

Varied vocabulary

Accurate spelling & word formation

Grammatical Range: 7.0

Mix of complex & simple sentences

Clear and correct grammar

Task Achievement: 6.0

Complete response

Suitable writing tone

Appropriate word count

1 paragraphs

167 words

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You are due to start new job next week but you will not be able to because you have some problems. Write a letter to your new employeer. In your letter: • Explain your situation • Describe your problems • Tell him or her when you think you can start.

Structure your letter

You have just moved into a new home and are plannig to hold a party. You are worried that the noise may disturb your neighbour. Write a letter to your neighbour. In your letter . introduce yourself . discribe your plans for the party . invite your neibourhour to come

Today, the quality of life in large cities is decreasing. Discuss the causes and solutions.

Scientific developments in farming always bring major benefits. To what extent do you agree or disagree with this statement?

Finding job satisfaction is considered to be a luxury in many developing countries. Why do you think that is? Do you think job satisfaction is important? Give reasons for your answer and include any relevant examples from your own knowledge or experience.

Some people believe that watching tv is bad for children, while others claim it has positive effecs for children as they grow up