Illiteracy continues to be a concern for many countries in the world today. What are the causes of illiteracy in the modern world, what effects does it have on people concerned and on society as a whole?
Nowadays, illiteracy is continuing around the world as a
wide-spread
concern. I believe, there are two well-known causes of low literacyCorrect your spelling
widespread
,
and a number of effects that people suffer Remove the comma
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as a result
of this
situation. First of all, one major reason is probably a
low economic condition of Correct article usage
the
family
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the family
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, the
poor parents struggle to afford Correct article usage
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foods
, clothes, and their children’s school needs as well, they tend to put their kids on labour to support the family economically. InFix the agreement mistake
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, some culture impacts on inability to read or write because local citizens feel that education is not necessary for living. For example
, in some agriculture-based society
, people believe that if the young generation got Fix the agreement mistake
societies
the
education, it would be useless and theyCorrect article usage
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will
not cultivate the land. The main long-term impact on people, a low educated person may have low Wrong verb form
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self- esteem
or feel emotions Correct your spelling
self-esteem
such
as shame, fear and powerlessness, which can often lead to isolation. President
of the International Literacy Association said, “Literacy is Correct article usage
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an
essential to informed decision-making, personal empowerment, and socialization”. Change the article
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social
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multi-generation
impact which means the children of parents who fail to complete primary school are more likely to follow in their footsteps. Those parents can prioritize Add an article
the multi-generation
a multi-generation
the
work before education, Correct article usage
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have
lower expectations from school Correct word choice
and have
that
lead to Correct pronoun usage
which
cycle
of disadvantage through generations. Add an article
a cycle
To sum up
, the causes of this
fact are to be poverty as a family and social culture. it brings an
isolation as a human and Remove the article
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cycle
of illiteracy generation Correct article usage
a cycle
as
a social impact.Correct your spelling
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