Many children these days have an unhealthy lifestyle. Both schools and parents are responsible for solving this problem. To what extent do you agree with this statement?

Nowadays, the methods of living

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changed considerably,

while

the

children

’s positions have undergone more than the rest age group people. I totally agree with the

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statement, believing that the new world has a noticeable potential to harm

children

through junk

food

and computer games, and two powerful organs, family and school, can manage these

problems

.

This

essay intends to express my perspective.

First,

it can be seen that people tend to consume fast

food

due to

not having enough time, in spite of international health organs struggling.

As a consequence

, the

children

are accustomed to having junk

food

as a normal nourishment.

Therefore

, they are deprived of healthy nourishment and needless to say, they suffer from various diseases. As a vivid example, in

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era

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youngsters have a lot of allergic

problems

which can

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by parents and

also

the educational system.

Hence

if they provide healthy

food

for them, the

problems

will

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remarkably.

Next,

regarding the technology era, the young generation spends significant time playing computer games.

Therefore

, they have fewer physical activities in comparison with the past.

As a result

, they will have been lazy, unfit and patient.

For instance

, bone

problems

for kids are common these days.

In addition

, the lack of confidence among young people is a dramatic result of it. Eventually, society confronts unhealthy kids more than in the past and it continues to do so.

To sum up

,

whereas

the alarms of scientists

children

are exposed to terrible conditions owing to the new lifestyle and I totally agree with

this

. Both of the most important power hand, family and school, can manage

this

challenge and help

children

to avoid consuming unhealthy

food

and

also

overusing computers for entertainment.