In some countries, there has been an increase in the number of parents who educate their children themselves at home instead of studying them to school. Do you think the advantages of this overweight the disadvantages?

Education plays one of the main

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in the lives of children.

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, many parents prefer distance education which is educating learners at

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.

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,

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studying at

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includes more benefits I support the opposite side which is studying at school because they will be disciplined and

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can feel the atmosphere of real learning. On the right hand, educating at

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has a plus. There

some

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children of poor families or

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of them live in rural areas for

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reason they do not always have money for public vehicles. Take

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my

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classmate. Even though he lives in the countryside he

study

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at school number 15 which is located in the city.

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, he is often late to his lessons and sometimes he misses them when the weather is bad. After all

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his

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was offered to study at

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and that was agreed by his parents.

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, now he studies at

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and he says that it was plus for

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of my parents.

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, studying at

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could impact to

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of

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a student

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student

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and even

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with

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peers from

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side.

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, though my neighbour's son entered

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university he studied at

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for about 10 years. As a consequence, I often talk to him on the phone and he says that it is difficult to socialize with my peers because of

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of interpersonal skills. In conclusion,

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educating at

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has more pluses I prefer to study at school because I compete in different subjects win my classmates and we share

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our knowledge.