Adults do less exercise nowadays. Some think that people can be encouraged to live healthy through sporting events such as Olympics or World Cup. Others think that there are more better ways to encourage adults for exercise. Discuss both views and state you opinion.
Some
people
say that the Olympics or World Cup can offer an opportunity according to exercise
people
's bodies. However
, it is no wonder that another way is also
existing that gives the opportunity to move their body. Therefore
this
essay aims to elaborate on both sides' opinions about the aforementioned and I describe my opinion.
To begin
with, it can affect for people
to promote exercising, according to the increasing of TV programs, especially sports, such
as the Olympics or the World Cup. That is
why it is possible that people
want to play sports like an athlete. For example
, after Tokyo Olympics, the population of skateboarding was quite rising compared to the past until it did not take place.
On the other hand
, there is a regime that more promotes the populace to exercise
than watch TV. These days, our society has a point system that people
can get some points when they moved their bodies. To illustrate, the application of Coke On. This
system is that if people
walk and accomplished their own target of walking steps, they can save points, and after, they can get some drinks instead
of saved points. It's useful to people
's motivation about exercise
.
From my perspective, I recommend for a company incorporate accustom to exercise
their employees. This
is because it is the most effective for adults to keep their health with exercise
. That is
why most people
spend their time at their work. In the fact, some companies are existing that promote their employees to exercise
. This
company's system is also
as same as Coke On.
In conclusion, I reiterate that TV broadcasting can affect the public to exercise
. However
, another way is existing to offer more exercise
such
as using point systems. In addition
, in my point of view that if companies incorporate some regime, people
can get more health.Submitted by euler0279 on
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