You have recently migrated to another country. Now write this letter to your friend to describe your present life. In your letter say.. When you have moved to this country Why you chose this country How things are now for you

Dear Franklin, I hope
this
letter finds you well. I'm writing to inform you that I'm now hanging on in Brazil, more precisely in Rio de Janeiro, the most beautiful city in my opinion. Most people migrate to
this
country because of its beauty, the warm weather
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of the year and, of course, the different culture. My case was not different, I always felt connected with the kindness of people from here and their work-life balance. I dreamed about
this
place for many years until I get the opportunity to move here as a job promotion, two months ago. When a colleague of mine, in charge of our Brazilian
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resigned, The CEO immediately asked me to assume
this
vacancy and promised me
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hybrid work. For
this
reason, I go to their site twice a week and on the other
days
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I work from home, which allows me to have now an exercise routine on the beach, as I live 5 minutes from there. On
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evening
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, I'm taking samba classes and I meet many friends by the way, my social life now is quite busy,
instead
of when I was in New York going from home to work almost every day. It has been a happy time for me. Looking forward to hearing from you, Best wishes Pollyanna
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