It is irrefutable fact that in recent years human activities have statically impacted biodiversity leading to the
extinction
of many endangered species. While it has various complex causes. I can propose several feasible methods
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tackling it .
First
of all, the
first
and foremost
cause
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this
negative influence on our ecosystem is overpopulation. The rise in
population
rate
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an increase in demand for land.
This
reason is
cause
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of animals and
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habitat.
For instance
, people are searching new places for accommodation or other things .
Therefore
, they are cutting down forests.
In addition
, a lot of environmental issues like water contamination,
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from cars and vehicles are
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responsible
responsibility
for our loss of biodiversity.
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affect
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the environmental ecosystem and
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population
.
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, the water contaminations are negatively impacting water
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life.
it is
cause
extinction
of it.
There are few viable solutions to it .
Firstly
, the government should make laws to control the
population
and impose
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every people.
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laws should run where the trend is extremely high.
Furthermore
,we should have responsibility for it. Because we must reduce using toxic things that
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will impact
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population
.
Moreover
, we
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due to vehicles can
be reduceChange the verb form
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by opting for public transport.
By way of conclusion,I once again reaffirm my position that these days human activities
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biodiversity. After that ,
this
phenomenon
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to the
extinction
of many endangered species .
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for it . If we reduce using
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cars and toxic things, we
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protect environment from
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.