Influence of human beings on the world’s eco system is leading to the extinction of species and loss of bio diversity. What are the primary causes of loss of biodiversity? What solutions can you suggest?

It is irrefutable fact that in recent years human activities have statically impacted biodiversity leading to the

extinction

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of many endangered species. While it has various complex causes. I can propose several feasible methods

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negative influence on our ecosystem is overpopulation. The rise in

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rate

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an increase in demand for land.

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extinction

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the extinction

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of animals and

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loss

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their

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habitat.

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, people are searching new places for accommodation or other things .

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, they are cutting down forests.

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, a lot of environmental issues like water contamination,

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and emissions

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from cars and vehicles are

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responsible

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for our loss of biodiversity.

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of

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the environmental ecosystem and

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population

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, the water contaminations are negatively impacting water

animals

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life.

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extinction

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of it. There are few viable solutions to it .

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, the government should make laws to control the

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and impose

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laws should run where the trend is extremely high.

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,we should have responsibility for it. Because we must reduce using toxic things that

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the environment

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environment

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environmental

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population

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.

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by opting for public transport. By way of conclusion,I once again reaffirm my position that these days human activities

are negatively impact

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biodiversity. After that ,

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to the

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of many endangered species .

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for it . If we reduce using

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cars and toxic things, we

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protect environment from

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