Some people say that to prevent illness and disease, governments should focus more on reducing environmental pollution and housing problems. To what extent do you agree or disagree?

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this

present world,

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health

problems are

concerning

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matter

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matters

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all around the world. Most

of

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apply

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health

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the health

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issues developed from environmental

pollution

and poor residential areas. It is agreed that healthy surroundings

plays

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important

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role

for

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overall

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the overall

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health

development of humanity. Government should take some

step

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steps

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to control the environmental impact by reducing the use of motor vehicles and by providing housing facilities to underdeveloped societies. On the one hand , most of the body disease occurs because of air

pollution

and water

pollution

that

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already

proves

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proven

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by some scientific research

for instance

, WHO says that 88

percent

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per cent

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of asthma,

lungs

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lung

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disease and skin cancer happens due to air and water

pollution

.

Thus

,the fossil fuel which is used in motor

vehicle

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vehicles

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and carbon dioxide

gass

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gas

polluted air and water .Higher authorities could stop by controlling the use of motor vehicle excess or by replacing

with

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them with

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electronic vehicles.

Secondly

, Accommodation is another major

reson

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reason

of

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regarding illness

for instance

, people who

lives

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in rural area under the

shead

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head

are more prone to get infected with some virus and bacteria that can cause some epidemic disease

such

as tuberculosis, chickens pox, polio

mylatus

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meatus

and

diahorrea

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diarrhoea

or dysentery so on. Governments should provide them

proper

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with proper

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accommodations so

the

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they

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can live healthier lives with their children. To

summaries

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summarise

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,

the

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apply

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health

problems will be reduced by controlling

pollution

in our environment. It is important for

nation

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national

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environment departments to do some effort on the regular basis to

prohibited

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further

illness .it is recommended that

,

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people should plant more and more trees and should

also

following

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the

environment

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environmental

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instructions and through their garbage in proper disposable methods to prevent

health

issues.